Score: 8

"Humorous, average voice acting"

submission: Lolcat History (Part 2/6)

date: February 13, 2009

I enjoyed watching this flash movie. Without any script and dialog it's already funny watching those lolcats moving. Seriously, the cat on the invisible bike was hilarious. Only downside in the movie is that the voice acting is not bad, but not loud enough, so could need some improvement. Thanks for the video,

Max.

Score: 9

"Awesome atmosphere!"

submission: Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)

date: October 29, 2008

The atmosphere in this part is nearly perfect. The music, sound effects and yes - this time even the main character's facial expressions, were great. I stay with my opinion that she should've made a small breathing sound or whatsoever.

There is one point of critisism on the total. The serie is quite serious, which is good for the theme. Yet there are some very comedian figures in this serie: the old man in part two just looked very funny (and did his pacemaker die due to the EMP?) and the guy in part 3 who died also didn't really look serious.

So there is room for improvement, but you are very talented in making movies (not only flash movies, I think you would do well in real movies when you look at sound effects and story). I'm looking forward to see the story unfold.

Thanks for making this great flash.

-Max

[P.s: 9/10][4/5]

Score: 8

"Scores on atmosphere, fails on expressions..."

submission: Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt2)

date: October 29, 2008

Like in my last review I didn't really like the expressions of the characters in the story. And why doesn't she make any noise at all? It would have been better if you'd made a slight breathing sound, upping the speed when tension is growing.

Still I think you've done an excellent job; the atmosphere is just great and the sounds are brilliant to. Now on to the final (?) or just third part :).

[8/10][4/5]